Arnobius Sestina Revis(it)ed

File under: “Hey, honey! I fuhgot a whole friggin stanza!”

Thus:

Even today, we dare like gods to mar our
Universal complexion – pulling out all stops
To foreshorten the finish line. But victory wheels
Around and smacks us in the gob. Our greed appalls
Even vice’s piety – but rolls many more balls
With less friction than any old paradise.

Comments

  1. Angelico Nguyen, Esq., OPL says

    Your korrektions are better than George Lucas’.

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