Our father is drunk again and sings a piece
Upon the deck, a snatch, a riff, a shard;
He ought not sing so crazy loud – suffice
To say the compass turns upon his word;
For neighbors want to hear – but what they’ve heard
Expressed is smiling tongue and laughing face –
A drunken fisherman who’s overboard
With sister moon, now hushing father’s eyes,
And brother sun, now blinding father’s voice.
He swigs his wine and holds a sloshing glass
Through which he spies opinions, preferred
Because they sound so good to folk so nice:
“I love that dirty water…!” sang the horde
Outside my father’s door – and he concurred.
For home’s a planted anchor, worldly-wise,
But progress blows with sweetened breezes toward
Our sister moon, who’s hushing father’s eyes,
And brother sun, who’s blinding father’s voice.
Within his wobbly tune, a note of grace
Is breaking through – to sober up and guard
His voyage. “Praise to you…” But lost in bliss,
As weevils in a bit of moldy bread,
Does he see that now twilight’s come aboard?
The shadows growing dark as sharks across
The dimming sea – they skim for us – are bored
By sister moon, who’s hushing father’s eyes
And brother sun, who’s blinding father’s voice.
O fisherman of men, not fish nor bird
Nor all the songs of earthly paradise
Can hook the world (the bait our dangling Lord) –
Not sister moon, who’s hushed up your eyes
Nor brother sun, who’s blinding Peter’s voice.
re: the photograph, isn’t that Barker from last summer?
I was looking for a lost contact lens! No, I don’t wear contacts. I don’t see what that has to do with anything. Shut up. No, you shut up.
Seriously though, nice work!
I mean, for a poem that isn’t about the Sásq’ets, it’s pretty good.
I like “home’s planted anchor”, twilight coming aboard, and especially … _especially_ “dark as sharks”.
That poem seems to have many layers. Well done.